Here I have a few homemade images that depict, stick-figure style, exactly how the action goes down in the Director's Cut Fight Scene of Like Broken Glass. They're pretty basic - I made them in MS Paint! - but they get the point across clearly. For all their simplicity, they were very helpful in determining/visualizing location and movement. I don't write much descriptive action; this cut version was really my first attempt, and having something to see really helps you out when you're trying to imagine.

Edmund is represented in green, which is his signature color in my universe. Lucy is magenta, Robert is blue, and the rowdy gang are in black. The crowd is orange. It should be noted that in LBG canon Chapter 2, party-goers file out in response to the "immature" spectacle Lucy makes of herself. In the Director's Cut, the opposite happens - more people come in to join the crowd around the fight action.